look, ....I've been a small time TV producer for a long time. if you wrote this and edited this, you should write and edit! Aspire to produce. Do not contact me, I'm not hitting on you. I have no pull, just a strong opinion. Use the passion I saw in this video and do something with it. If the emotion was real, channel it. If you were "acting", you have a gift. If it was both, even better. good luck, take care, good bye